Tuesday, 14 February 2017

Pigeon: Impossible

This week we were asked to write a newspaper atricle and plan out a video that we saw called Pigeon: Impossible. Next time i will make it nicer to look at by adding colour. I really like the way my newspaper came out.



2 comments:

  1. Hi Brielle,
    I like how you included your planning and article. Next time maybe you could make the article bigger so you can read it.

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  2. Hey Brielle, I really like how you set it out with your plan clearly on the left and your article on the right. Next time you make your article readable? Thanks!

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